I don't normally comment directly on the stories, because I want to be impartial. However, I must admit this one has really drawn me in!
I'm truly glad to see the author is willing to take time to actually work on the story.
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So many of our authors just give up when I sent them a pm about corrections they need to make.
With Casey Lynn's obvious talent, and positive attitude, I have no doubt she will become a favorite in the Fan Fiction arena!
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