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#122485 - 03/06/08 03:29 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: eyeshigh]
Rachel =] Offline
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Registered: 02/27/08
Posts: 51
How about:
Look at my village,
The villagers fish and build,
Where is your village?

The builder gets wood,
And the builder gets dry grass,
Then the fire burns.

Lol, I'm not too good, but I'm posting more.

On Isola's shores,
With help, a small village thrives,
Children find mushrooms,
The adults harvest and build,
And the scientists research.
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#122491 - 03/06/08 04:04 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Rachel =]]
Airstream Raider Offline
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Registered: 08/13/07
Posts: 789
Loc: blululup. Im not telling you!
Sit in the ShoutBox
ARs favorite to do
Besides post and help
fellow forumers today
and make avatars for friends

Some spoiler ones

Mystical writings
ancient moseics burried
gong pieces to find

a slippery rock
makes a villager fall
to Isolas land

Vurtual people
thrive on Isolas island
working to survive

A villager sits
with a kid in both her arms
by a waterfall

early in the day
small collectables apear
lined up on the shore

a beautiful pond
a villager jumps in to
and SPLASH goes water

The gong sound dies out
villagers rush to the sound
to hear of past
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#122492 - 03/06/08 04:25 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Airstream Raider]
Gamemastr1 Offline
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Registered: 02/26/07
Posts: 847
Ok, I am not eligible to win but I had to add one of my own.


Gamey's Haiku
Tmac and Gamey
playing insane asylum
in pink rooms they sit

\:\? \:\? \:\? \:\? \:\? \:\? \:\? \:\? \:\? \:\?

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#122494 - 03/06/08 05:18 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Gamemastr1]
Krystal Offline
Fan Fiction Enthusiast

Registered: 05/03/07
Posts: 2889
Loc: The 'Merica
Ooh! GAMEY! You gave me an idea for another Haiku!!!!

I call it: Insane Asylum.

All of us crazy
"Shout"ing out many odd things
As we played the game
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#122502 - 03/06/08 05:57 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Gamemastr1]
Tmac Offline
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Registered: 02/15/07
Posts: 597
Originally Posted By: Gamemastr1
Ok, I am not eligible to win but I had to add one of my own.


Gamey's Haiku
Tmac and Gamey
playing insane asylum
in pink rooms they sit

\:\? \:\? \:\? \:\? \:\? \:\? \:\? \:\? \:\? \:\?


I LOVE IT GAMEY !!!!!!!!!!!

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#122504 - 03/06/08 06:06 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Tmac]
Tmac Offline
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Registered: 02/15/07
Posts: 597
where does obi go
when he leaves his island home
only gamey knows

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#122506 - 03/06/08 06:36 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Tmac]
Tmac Offline
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Registered: 02/15/07
Posts: 597
our red haired obi
the little traveling man
going to far lands

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#122637 - 03/07/08 02:52 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Tmac]
Tmac Offline
Master

Registered: 02/15/07
Posts: 597
[SPOILER]



waves splashing the shore
the sun making the sand hot
no golden child here

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#122724 - 03/07/08 10:34 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Jazzo]
Annthewhofan Offline
Fan Fiction Enthusiast

Registered: 03/09/07
Posts: 2471
Loc: Northwest, England
Originally Posted By: Jazzo
That's good Ann, but the lines have to be 5, 7, 5, syllables, not words. But other than that it's a good poem. \:\)

I don't know what that means

I un-der-stand now

I understand now
how this is surpose to be
before was confused


Edited by Annthewhofan (03/07/08 10:50 PM)
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#122792 - 03/08/08 01:46 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Annthewhofan]
Meems Offline
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Registered: 02/16/08
Posts: 101
Loc: the hills and hollers of Tenne...
Here is one that fell out of my head this morning.

Sun sparkle delight
warms earth and the buried seed
bursts upwards in sight.
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