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#122228 - 03/04/08 09:01 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: eyeshigh]
laurence Offline
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Registered: 11/23/06
Posts: 4950
Loc: Paris, France
Thanks but I'm afraid that I'm not good enough in English! \:\/
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#122230 - 03/04/08 09:03 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: laurence]
TheVillageIdiot Offline
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Registered: 04/13/05
Posts: 2638
Loc: Island of Isola
I stink at English too. It's to bad that is the only language I speak. \:\( I say ol’e chap, give it a try!
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#122235 - 03/04/08 09:14 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: TheVillageIdiot]
Jazzo Offline
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Registered: 11/04/06
Posts: 2137
Loc: jazzothegreat.com
I'm fluent in 17 languages \:D no, I'm not. I speak Latin, Tempus Fugit, Amo amas amat, cogito ergo sum, veni vidi vici

LOL, and I can count to ten in 7 languages:
English
Spanish
French
Italian
German
Latin
Hebrew

And I am good with English cuz my mom's a grammar freak \:\)


Edited by Jazzo (03/04/08 09:14 PM)

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#122238 - 03/04/08 09:26 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Jazzo]
eyeshigh Offline
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Registered: 09/22/06
Posts: 1709
Loc: Houston, TX
Originally Posted By: Jazzo


And I am good with English cuz my mom's a grammar freak \:\)


lol

"cuz" she's a grammar freak huh?
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#122244 - 03/04/08 09:50 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: eyeshigh]
Jazzo Offline
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Registered: 11/04/06
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Loc: jazzothegreat.com
I said grammar, not spelling \:\)

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#122270 - 03/04/08 11:12 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: eyeshigh]
Jazzo Offline
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Registered: 11/04/06
Posts: 2137
Loc: jazzothegreat.com
(c'mon more people enter, plz)

My first Tanka (it's just a tanka version of ode to Lapis)

Lapis you're the best,
Hardest worker no contest,
In peace you shall rest,
A master at everything,
For you I'd do anything.

Tanka #2

Watch them work all day,
Farming, building, healing too,
That's Isola's way,
As a tribe they'll all pull through,
Solve a puzzle shout woohoo

That's an ABABB rhyme scheme. \:\)

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#122278 - 03/05/08 12:07 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Jazzo]
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Registered: 09/22/06
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Loc: Houston, TX
Tankas and Haiku do not have to rhyme - although its not a bad thing if they do \:\)

I'm sure people are working on their poetry
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#122279 - 03/05/08 12:09 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Jazzo]
biddy Offline
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Registered: 08/08/06
Posts: 204
Loc: Lancashire Great Britain
And how are we supposed to compete with you Jazzo!!!!! \:D \:D \:D

Thank you Eyeshigh for this contest I shall have to get my thinking cap on!!!!! \:\)

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#122284 - 03/05/08 12:31 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: biddy]
Rockmower Moderator Offline
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Registered: 12/16/07
Posts: 1200
Loc: The Beautiful Ozarks
I stink at Haiku
It all just makes me so blue!
But rhymes I do like!
So that is what I've written.

Syllables to count?
I rarely take all the time
to put so much in
to the words I would spin here.



Edited by Rockmower (03/05/08 12:34 AM)
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#122302 - 03/05/08 02:06 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: eyeshigh]
Jazzo Offline
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Registered: 11/04/06
Posts: 2137
Loc: jazzothegreat.com
Originally Posted By: eyeshigh
Tankas and Haiku do not have to rhyme - although its not a bad thing if they do \:\)


I know, but I like them better when they do \:\) I'm just impatient \:\)

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