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#125962 - 03/27/08 08:51 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: eyeshigh]
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WhensVV3 out?
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#126206 - 03/28/08 10:27 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Becca123]
Jazzo Offline
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Registered: 11/04/06
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Another VV3 Tanka:

VV TSC,
Lots more fun for you and me,
Happy I shall be,
Food I hope there is plenty,
Lots of children yelling "WEE!"

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#126269 - 03/29/08 05:37 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Jazzo]
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had to give this a try - haikus are so much fun \:\)

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#126442 - 03/30/08 09:56 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: squawky]
Becca123 Offline
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Registered: 12/28/07
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A villagers gone,
The new tombstone has flowers,
Oh please do not mourn,
Your villager was alive,
Doing whats best for the tribe.

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#126464 - 03/30/08 01:51 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: eyeshigh]
halidog Offline
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Quote:
Poems about LDW

I don't know if anyone else caught this, but that line has 8 syllables, not 7
Poems A Bout L D Dou Ble U
See?

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#126515 - 03/30/08 06:41 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: halidog]
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I must go and check
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Are doing okay today
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#126565 - 03/30/08 09:37 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: halidog]
Izzy2k2 Offline
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Loc: Oklahoma
Originally Posted By: halidog
Quote:
Poems about LDW

I don't know if anyone else caught this, but that line has 8 syllables, not 7
Poems A Bout L D Dou Ble U
See?
Maybe "LDW" was meant to be an abbreviation for "Last Day of Work"? Not "L D Dou ble U"? I'm not sure though \:\) .

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Pixelated people work
On the colored screen
Pixelated children play
I then see my tribe needs food \:o !
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#126594 - 03/30/08 11:17 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Izzy2k2]
Krystal Offline
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That would still be too many syllables...
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#126614 - 03/31/08 02:59 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: halidog]
Becca123 Offline
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Registered: 12/28/07
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Loc: In a happy place =D
Originally Posted By: halidog
Quote:
Poems about LDW

I don't know if anyone else caught this, but that line has 8 syllables, not 7
Poems A Bout L D Dou Ble U
See?


Is poems two syllables (po-ems)?
If it is then it has nine syllables. I think that whoever wrote it had: po-ems a-bout L-D-W, forgetting that W is is three syllables not 1. \:\)


Edited by Becca123 (03/31/08 03:01 AM)

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#126615 - 03/31/08 03:04 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Krystal]
Becca123 Offline
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Registered: 12/28/07
Posts: 709
Loc: In a happy place =D
Originally Posted By: Krystal
This addiction is
Stronger than I can be
I must go and check
To make sure my villagers
Are doing okay today


And Krystal, that 2nd line only has six syllables \:\)

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