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#123288 - 03/10/08 07:33 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Meems]
halidog Offline
Fan Fiction Enthusiast

Registered: 01/24/08
Posts: 1718
Loc: One of the thirteen colonies
Algae in the sea
No crops growing; lucky me
And a new baby


Edited by halidog (03/10/08 07:33 PM)

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#123290 - 03/10/08 07:37 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: halidog]
TheVillageIdiot Offline
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Registered: 04/13/05
Posts: 2638
Loc: Island of Isola
What Should I Get First?
Farming? Or Engineering?
I Just Can’t Decide
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#123492 - 03/12/08 12:48 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: TheVillageIdiot]
Jazzo Offline
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Registered: 11/04/06
Posts: 2137
Loc: jazzothegreat.com
The Village Love Curse (A series of Haiku's) by Jazzo (And do we choose which is our best i.e. which we want to be in the final contest?)

Something special's here,
It's attacking villages,
Isola I fear.

Sometimes it is nice,
Sometimes it ends happily,
Sometimes sacrifice.

What it does is this,
Villagers will fall in love,
That seems like kindness.

Here is the issue,
Sometimes it won't work both ways,
Now grab a tissue.

Then what happens? This:
Villagers get heartbroken,
Not even one kiss.

You can't force on love,
Sometimes things just won't work out,
Then I look above,

Why do things get worse,
Why can't love always be fare,
But that is the curse.

I hope that my tribe,
Gets the good end of this curse,
Not the heart-break vibe.

Wow, that took a while to write. Especially cuz each one has an ABA rhyme scheme. I know they don't have to rhyme but I'm a rhyming freak!


Edited by Gamemastr1 (03/13/08 12:13 AM)

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#123506 - 03/12/08 03:26 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Jazzo]
eyeshigh Offline
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Registered: 09/22/06
Posts: 1709
Loc: Houston, TX
We (moderators) will choose our favorites (only one entry per person max) and then there will be a vote from those.
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but if they tell you a wall has wet paint you will have to touch it to be sure?

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#123610 - 03/12/08 09:56 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: eyeshigh]
Jazzo Offline
Master Magician

Registered: 11/04/06
Posts: 2137
Loc: jazzothegreat.com
Oh I just realized, one line has too many syllabes. Can u replace "Then you grab a tissue" with "Now grab a tissue" please? Thanks \:\) and I see it's only one favorite, so I guess this "group" of haiku's can't all be in the finals. Oh well.

EDIT: Thanks Gamey \:\)


Edited by Jazzo (03/13/08 12:14 AM)

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#123802 - 03/14/08 12:53 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Jazzo]
Becca123 Offline
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Registered: 12/28/07
Posts: 709
Loc: In a happy place =D
Quote:
Why do things get worse,
Why can't love always be fare,
But that is the curse.

____________________________________

And fare needs to be fair
lolz \:\)


Edited by Becca123 (03/14/08 12:54 PM)

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#123803 - 03/14/08 01:02 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Becca123]
Becca123 Offline
Guru

Registered: 12/28/07
Posts: 709
Loc: In a happy place =D
The beauty of life,
We give to our villagers,
Keep them warm and safe.

A crackling fire,
In the middle of the night,
Wake up, see it glow.

Cute village newborns,
Nurture them with all your heart,
Never let them go...

\:\)


Edited by Becca123 (03/14/08 01:03 PM)

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#123867 - 03/14/08 08:02 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Becca123]
Tmac Offline
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Registered: 02/15/07
Posts: 597
Becca123, those are really good ! \:D

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#123870 - 03/14/08 08:17 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Becca123]
Jazzo Offline
Master Magician

Registered: 11/04/06
Posts: 2137
Loc: jazzothegreat.com
Originally Posted By: Becca123
Quote:
Why do things get worse,
Why can't love always be fare,
But that is the curse.

____________________________________

And fare needs to be fair
lolz \:\)


:-PPPPPP and nice poems btw

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#123952 - 03/14/08 10:55 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Jazzo]
Becca123 Offline
Guru

Registered: 12/28/07
Posts: 709
Loc: In a happy place =D
I have some more on page 3

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