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#125962 - 03/27/08 08:51 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: eyeshigh]
VVMeggie Fan Fiction Enthusiast Registered: 03/22/08 Posts: 386 Loc: In The Basement	Virtual Villagers What a fun game WhensVV3 out? _________________________ Just because you don't see it doesn't mean it doesn't exist! www.virtualvillagerstories.blogspot.com Visit My Forums www.storiesanddrawings.chocoforum.net
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#126206 - 03/28/08 10:27 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Becca123]
Jazzo Master Magician Registered: 11/04/06 Posts: 2137 Loc: jazzothegreat.com	Another VV3 Tanka: VV TSC, Lots more fun for you and me, Happy I shall be, Food I hope there is plenty, Lots of children yelling "WEE!"
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#126269 - 03/29/08 05:37 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Jazzo]
squawky Master Registered: 04/12/06 Posts: 596 Loc: New England	had to give this a try - haikus are so much fun $\:\)$ Feed fish, water plants Late at night, villagers dance Oh, no... morning's here _________________________ It is pitch black. You are likely to be eaten by a grue.
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#126442 - 03/30/08 09:56 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: squawky]
Becca123 Guru Registered: 12/28/07 Posts: 709 Loc: In a happy place =D	A villagers gone, The new tombstone has flowers, Oh please do not mourn, Your villager was alive, Doing whats best for the tribe.
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#126464 - 03/30/08 01:51 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: eyeshigh]
halidog Fan Fiction Enthusiast Registered: 01/24/08 Posts: 1718 Loc: One of the thirteen colonies	Quote: Poems about LDW I don't know if anyone else caught this, but that line has 8 syllables, not 7 Poems A Bout L D Dou Ble U See? _________________________ http://dragcave.net/user/senorboduke http://halidog.myminicity.com http://halidogg.miniville.fr/
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#126515 - 03/30/08 06:41 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: halidog]
Krystal Fan Fiction Enthusiast Registered: 05/03/07 Posts: 2889 Loc: The 'Merica	This addiction is Stronger than I can be I must go and check To make sure my villagers Are doing okay today _________________________ And what if it makes you laugh now but you cry as you fall asleep?
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#126565 - 03/30/08 09:37 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: halidog]
Izzy2k2 Consigliere Registered: 12/05/06 Posts: 208 Loc: Oklahoma	Originally Posted By: halidog Quote: Poems about LDW I don't know if anyone else caught this, but that line has 8 syllables, not 7 Poems A Bout L D Dou Ble U See? Maybe "LDW" was meant to be an abbreviation for "Last Day of Work"? Not "L D Dou ble U"? I'm not sure though $\:\)$ . On the monitor Pixelated people work On the colored screen Pixelated children play I then see my tribe needs food $\:o$ ! _________________________ Block B.
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#126594 - 03/30/08 11:17 PM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Izzy2k2]
Krystal Fan Fiction Enthusiast Registered: 05/03/07 Posts: 2889 Loc: The 'Merica	That would still be too many syllables... _________________________ And what if it makes you laugh now but you cry as you fall asleep?
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#126614 - 03/31/08 02:59 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: halidog]
Becca123 Guru Registered: 12/28/07 Posts: 709 Loc: In a happy place =D	Originally Posted By: halidog Quote: Poems about LDW I don't know if anyone else caught this, but that line has 8 syllables, not 7 Poems A Bout L D Dou Ble U See? Is poems two syllables (po-ems)? If it is then it has nine syllables. I think that whoever wrote it had: po-ems a-bout L-D-W, forgetting that W is is three syllables not 1. $\:\)$ Edited by Becca123 (03/31/08 03:01 AM)
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#126615 - 03/31/08 03:04 AM Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka [Re: Krystal]
Becca123 Guru Registered: 12/28/07 Posts: 709 Loc: In a happy place =D	Originally Posted By: Krystal This addiction is Stronger than I can be I must go and check To make sure my villagers Are doing okay today And Krystal, that 2nd line only has six syllables $\:\)$
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